Sunday, May 3, 2015

Dreams 4/27

Prompt:  Based on your brainstorming via Edmodo, write a short poem elaborating on your dream and/or why dreams or visions are an important part of life.



Dreams are basic human element because they keep us with hope
We could not function with out the basic idea that some day a
been of light could shine into our lives 
That we could make our family proud or ourselves proud.

We as human have dream behind what seems possible but if
those dream are reached the make for a moment of true and utter perfection
As well as the simple dreams have an effect that is amazing
This is why we as humans have dreams at least to my believes


I dream that someday I can help my parent pay their house of.
I dream that someday I can graduate from college.
I dream that someday I can have a business of my own.
I dream that someday I can better the live of thousand. 






1 comment:

  1. I can see how you made this poem personal and general. It gives the poem more life and detail. Overall, this was a good blog.

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