Hey Omar! First off, very good job in designing your butterfly. It was a very unique and creative idea that you can see fire from one point of view and grass from the other. I would've never thought of that! Though, there are some recommendations I have for you. You need to include more tags in your butterfly because the requirement is fourteen and you only have seven. You might also want to include the MLA citation. Lastly, I think you should include your poem so the reader can see the mood of the poem easier and understand your tags better. Besides that, good job!
Hey Omar. I really like the way you set up your butterfly. It was very unique and included different perspectives and point of views. I agree with Jared. You only have seven tags when there should be fourteen. Second of all, I remember seeing a gas chamber in your butterfly but I don't see it now. Maybe you took it out for a reason, but I'm pretty sure it symobolized something. Finally, the poem is a pretty crucial part of the butterfly. Overall, your butterfly was very unique and very special but it could use a bit more work.
Hi Omar! You did an amazing job with your butterfly and even though I've never read the poem, I could tell you interpreted the poem perfectly based on your project. I liked how you created two different sides/point of views on how the Jews perceived the camps by looking through the dark side or through the green side. Nick and Jared pointed out good recommendations for your butterfly; firstly to include your poem so I can understand why you included certain parts of your butterfly. Secondly, you only have seven which in my eye is barely meeting standards because it's half of the total. Lastly, I think you should have included your gas chamber because it included one of the points of views. Otherwise, really good job on the physical project, just the technical part of the project needs to have more work done on it.
Hey Omar, you did a really good job with your butterfly. Immediately looking at it I could tell that you spent a lot of time and effort on working on this project. I love how creative you were it the changes of perspective in the work. The only thing I would recommend would to add your poem to your post so we could read it and completely understand your work. Good job man.
Hey Omar! From reading your tags, I can tell that you really had thought about this poem and how you were going to interpret it. I can tell because I don't think anyone would have had the unique idea to put the nature facing the camp. How they would see that and think about being free. However on the outside people going into the camp would see the flames, and how there was no justice that the Jews had. By far I think this was the most thought out butterfly, and I really enjoyed the presentation as well. Nice job!
Hey Omar! First off, very good job in designing your butterfly. It was a very unique and creative idea that you can see fire from one point of view and grass from the other. I would've never thought of that! Though, there are some recommendations I have for you. You need to include more tags in your butterfly because the requirement is fourteen and you only have seven. You might also want to include the MLA citation. Lastly, I think you should include your poem so the reader can see the mood of the poem easier and understand your tags better. Besides that, good job!
ReplyDeleteHey Omar. I really like the way you set up your butterfly. It was very unique and included different perspectives and point of views. I agree with Jared. You only have seven tags when there should be fourteen. Second of all, I remember seeing a gas chamber in your butterfly but I don't see it now. Maybe you took it out for a reason, but I'm pretty sure it symobolized something. Finally, the poem is a pretty crucial part of the butterfly. Overall, your butterfly was very unique and very special but it could use a bit more work.
ReplyDeleteHi Omar! You did an amazing job with your butterfly and even though I've never read the poem, I could tell you interpreted the poem perfectly based on your project. I liked how you created two different sides/point of views on how the Jews perceived the camps by looking through the dark side or through the green side. Nick and Jared pointed out good recommendations for your butterfly; firstly to include your poem so I can understand why you included certain parts of your butterfly. Secondly, you only have seven which in my eye is barely meeting standards because it's half of the total. Lastly, I think you should have included your gas chamber because it included one of the points of views. Otherwise, really good job on the physical project, just the technical part of the project needs to have more work done on it.
ReplyDeleteHey Omar, you did a really good job with your butterfly. Immediately looking at it I could tell that you spent a lot of time and effort on working on this project. I love how creative you were it the changes of perspective in the work. The only thing I would recommend would to add your poem to your post so we could read it and completely understand your work. Good job man.
ReplyDeleteHey Omar! From reading your tags, I can tell that you really had thought about this poem and how you were going to interpret it. I can tell because I don't think anyone would have had the unique idea to put the nature facing the camp. How they would see that and think about being free. However on the outside people going into the camp would see the flames, and how there was no justice that the Jews had. By far I think this was the most thought out butterfly, and I really enjoyed the presentation as well. Nice job!
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